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Two years ago I have been in London to attend a course of english. I stayed  there three weeks. I knew a lot of people around the world ,especially spanish . There were a lot of italians and so it was so hard to speak just in english. I visited the city with my new friends , a japanese and a french.  The city was very big not like mine, the weather was wet. 

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Ossiandog profile picture OssiandogMarch 2014
Ossiandog profile picture Ossiandog Two years ago I was in London to attend an English course. I stayed there for three weeks. I got to know a lot of people from around the world ,especially spanish . There were a lot of italians,so it was so hard to speak just in english. I visited the city with my new friends , one japanese and the other french. The city was very big, not like mine. The weather was wet
Ossiandog profile picture OssiandogMarch 2014
Two years ago I was in London to attend a an English course. I stayed there for three weeks. I got to know a lot of people from around the world ,especially spanish . There were a lot of italians,so it was so hard to speak just in english. I visited the city with my new friends , one japanese and the other french. The city was very big, not like mine. The weather was wet.
MattGerasimovich profile picture MattGerasimovichMarch 2014

Two years ago I went to London to attend a course of English. I stayed there for three weeks. I knew a lot of people around the world, especially Spanish. There were a lot of Italians and so it was so hard to speak just in English. I visited the city with my new friends from Japan and France.  The city was very big, not like mine, the weather was wet. 

 
 
Camy89 profile picture Camy89March 2014
can you correct my mistakes please?
falcon1990 profile picture falcon1990March 2014
you have some mistakes but generally it is good)